This is a temporary/intermediate place for us all to gather our memoirs from the trip to israel. Gary and i are starting this "blog", and anyone can (and should!) contribute.
To contribute anything, just add a comment.
The posts are broken into days, and the paragraphs will be numbered. if you want to add anything or change anything, write a comment, say where you want to add the contribution or what you want to change, and i will add/change accordingly as soon as i see your comment. for example, you can say: " in paragraph 6, please change the sentence 'ben endured the israeli heat bravely' to 'ben complained a lot about the weather'", etc. or you can say "please add the following text to the story, between paragraphs 12 and 13" and write a bunch of text.
i also suggest to color code people's contributions, so that we know who said what (especially when you trash each other)
so, get to work!!
-keren
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